Anciliary Work: Zane

My second draft of the ancillaries has to be flattened and added to my blog, but here is what Zane has been up to!

Third Draft (Ad):
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-For this we didn't think that the graphics did a really good job portraying the documentary, it's too simple and doesn't match up with the mood of the documentary. It would be better if there was a picture of maybe a well know woman from comic books.

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-However the Orange of the boxes work well because it goes with our ComicCorp. logo colours.


Fourth Draft (Ad):
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-This one is very creative and engaging. It's a good example of clever advertising, 'Women in Comics', a woman made of comics, hence, she's in comics. Good one Zane!

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-Although the boxes in believe need to be changed back to orange. I also had the worry that because it needs to be at a distance for the womans face to be seen clearly, people wont see the detail, that the little pictures a comic covers. Also because our advertisment will be taking up the whole page of a newspaper i fear that it will be too close and people wont really get it (i realised this after seeing it in print form).

First draft (double page spread):
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-The bottom is quite good, it looks like a real product and is well organised.

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-however the one majour critisizm for this is that the background picture has no relevance, and is not clear. The title is also quite simple and looks wrong, i feel it could be a little more creative.