Peer Evaluation:

Today's lesson was to evaluate each others work. This was a very productive lesson, the main points that were made about ours so far were:

1) Improve the script i.e explanations before the dialogue.

-To add to this i need to clarify that the extended dialogue of the presenter is going to be a VO on other clips.

2) 'Make sure that the audience know that there will be more to the documentary (5 min extract, therefor an idea of what they are going to miss out).'

-I agree, however just to point out, there will be extracts of interviews, which will be muted with the presenter's VO talking about them. This does do that, but i understand what the point being made is, it looks like a 5 minute documentary.

3) Try to use a variety of shots.

- I said i didn't agree so much with this one, but never the less we'll experiment with more angles.

4) Too long?

-I don't think that this will be a problem, firstly because i believe it will go by quickly, and lastly because if it is too long then we can cut it down, the opening shouldn't give too much away (referring back to point 2).