EBI:
-This is far too basic. The text can be better placed and it's also missing other information.
Wednesday, 17 March 2010
Mirella's Anciliary:
THIS is Mirella's first draft of the ancillary, it's the advertisement. I couldn't put it up because blogger was acting up again, sorry for the inconvenience!
Hannah's Anciliary:
This is my first draft of the advertisment.
EBI:
-This hasen't been properly looked at, but i believe that we should change the colour scheme to orange and white, like the logo. It would work better in terms of design.
EBI:
-It was suggested that instead of having a lot of women on the page there should be only one. This looks more like a 'childerens Tv show advertisment', which i slightly agree with. It needs to be more mature.
This is my third draft of the double page spread:
EBI:-This hasen't been properly looked at, but i believe that we should change the colour scheme to orange and white, like the logo. It would work better in terms of design.
Tuesday, 16 March 2010
Anciliary Work: Zane
My second draft of the ancillaries has to be flattened and added to my blog, but here is what Zane has been up to!
Third Draft (Ad):
EBI
-For this we didn't think that the graphics did a really good job portraying the documentary, it's too simple and doesn't match up with the mood of the documentary. It would be better if there was a picture of maybe a well know woman from comic books.
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-However the Orange of the boxes work well because it goes with our ComicCorp. logo colours.
Fourth Draft (Ad):
WWW
-This one is very creative and engaging. It's a good example of clever advertising, 'Women in Comics', a woman made of comics, hence, she's in comics. Good one Zane!
EBI
-Although the boxes in believe need to be changed back to orange. I also had the worry that because it needs to be at a distance for the womans face to be seen clearly, people wont see the detail, that the little pictures a comic covers. Also because our advertisment will be taking up the whole page of a newspaper i fear that it will be too close and people wont really get it (i realised this after seeing it in print form).
First draft (double page spread):
WWW
-The bottom is quite good, it looks like a real product and is well organised.
EBI
-however the one majour critisizm for this is that the background picture has no relevance, and is not clear. The title is also quite simple and looks wrong, i feel it could be a little more creative.
Third Draft (Ad):
EBI-For this we didn't think that the graphics did a really good job portraying the documentary, it's too simple and doesn't match up with the mood of the documentary. It would be better if there was a picture of maybe a well know woman from comic books.
www
-However the Orange of the boxes work well because it goes with our ComicCorp. logo colours.
Fourth Draft (Ad):
WWW-This one is very creative and engaging. It's a good example of clever advertising, 'Women in Comics', a woman made of comics, hence, she's in comics. Good one Zane!
EBI
-Although the boxes in believe need to be changed back to orange. I also had the worry that because it needs to be at a distance for the womans face to be seen clearly, people wont see the detail, that the little pictures a comic covers. Also because our advertisment will be taking up the whole page of a newspaper i fear that it will be too close and people wont really get it (i realised this after seeing it in print form).
First draft (double page spread):
WWW-The bottom is quite good, it looks like a real product and is well organised.
EBI
-however the one majour critisizm for this is that the background picture has no relevance, and is not clear. The title is also quite simple and looks wrong, i feel it could be a little more creative.
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